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I really like one thing that stand out: the pictures! They are very eye-opening and colorful. And I also think it is cool that you added the birds’ powers to each game.

But now for constructive criticism: as everyone else said, what’s with the caps on every word?? It kinda makes me dizzy. And some of the facts seem just like opinion. For instance:

Bomb
ABStarWars: Force, lightsaber

Woah, hold up! Since when did Bomb ever use a lightsaber in I or II? Sure, he uses one in promotional art, but not actual gameplay!! So you might need to tweak on the facts quite a bit. And you also need to make this forum a LITTLE(actually, little seems like an insufficient term here) bit more smaller and organized.

So yeah, the guide seems that it should stay with other AB guides(it would make a vivid welcome to new members. ALL THOSE PICTURES!!!), but it needs some major fixes. Keep working at it, and don’t give up! We’re all behind your back to support you if you ever need help!! :)